Ohhh, this is exactly what I've wanted to see ever since CoE. I adored Alice, and what you've done with her and Jack's relationship is just perfect. I especially love how she doesn't give in to rage and shut him out completely. I love how he's skipping around to different points in her life, and how she can see the slight differences in him every time. I even didn't hate Lucy marrying David or the fact that he named Alice for Rose, both of which could have come off so cliched in the hands of a less deft writer.
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ninetydegrees
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Lovely and heartbreaking.